inspired by: https://www.reddit.com/r/WorcesterMA/comments/1kizuwn/posters/_if/_anyone/_wants/_em/_now/_without/_typos/
Originally Posted By u/saviorofGOAT At 2025-05-12 05:57:00 PM | Source
this post was submitted on 13 May 2025
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I agree with the others that it's a bit too dense. Shortening it up and making it a bit more succinct would help.
Also, one small note (just add the word 'put'):
...kidnapped imprisoned & -put- in centers of detention...
It's a stylistic choice, but I think the & should be read as being between kidnapped & imprisoned
Good point. I didn't really think of it like that (or see it that way visually), but that would make sense.