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Hi folks, and welcome to writing club update number 14 (fourteen!). Opening up to page 14 of Ray Bradbury's The Martian Chronicles we find this paradoxically stark and effusive description of a coming storm. Or perhaps all coming storms:

It was like those days when you heard a thunderstorm coming and there was the waiting silence and then the faintest pressure of the atmosphere as the climate blew over the land in shifts and shadows and vapors. And the change pressed at your ears and you were suspended in the waiting time of the coming storm.

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And then the storm. The electric illumination, the engulfments of dark wash and sounding black fell down, shutting in, forever.

Being as much of my bioregion is currently in the middle of a month-long drought, we could do with a "dark wash" right now. I hope you've had a decent amount of rain wherever you are, and if you're also in a drought, I wish for both of us a big beautiful storm soon!

Speaking of welcome deluges, here are our wonderful writers:

Hopefully your writing has felt more like a deluge than a drought, but even the latter can be constructive in its own way. This also goes to any visitors not on this list (welcome!): please feel welcome to reply and comment with your own thoughts and projects!

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[–] grrgyle@slrpnk.net 5 points 6 months ago* (last edited 6 months ago) (3 children)

My writing drought continues, while my "ideas list" ballooons! Actually, I had the good fortune to meet two different writers on two different social outings just last week, thus providing a solid checkmark in the "cons" column of my career aspiration of becoming a full-time misanthrope. It was really motivating hearing other people gush about writing, and in addition to motivating me to write more, reminded me to post this writing club update!

I feel like my ideas are getting antsy--that if I don't enunciate them soon they will rebel and strike me with a fey mood, or maybe even that I'll become possessed by one of my ideas! Actually, this comment is a perfect example of creativity seeping into the rest of my text: my normal, everyday writing becomes stranger and more flowery the longer I go without a creative outlet hahahaa.

PS. My goal for the month will be super broad: write and share any one of my ideas.

[–] hazeebabee@slrpnk.net 2 points 6 months ago (1 children)

Oooo its always nice to meet other writers in real life. I've found it really helps with inspiration and motivation.

And hopefully the dam breaks and you get a huge out pouring of creativity soon! Sometimes the drought really does come before the storm

[–] grrgyle@slrpnk.net 2 points 6 months ago

Sometimes the drought really does come before the storm

🙏🙏🙏

Actually, just in reading everyone's comments for this writing club update, I got inspired to jot down an indulgent little poem (it's about layoffs if you can't tell, hehe), so maybe that is the first few opening drips in a coming storm!

[–] Clockwork@slrpnk.net 2 points 6 months ago* (last edited 6 months ago) (1 children)

while my “ideas list” ballooons

I can guarantee that this is the eternal burden regardless of writing droughts! It might feel bad, but look at the positives: your brain is still active and ready to create. It would be ten times worse if you kept writing with an empty ideas' list.

Also, please share those ideas! I'd love to join in the brainstorm and bounce them around.

[–] grrgyle@slrpnk.net 2 points 6 months ago

Thanks! I have actually experienced an empty ideas list before (when working a lot of overtime), and you're right it is awful wanting to be creative, but finding you have no ideas. It can take a while to recover from that kind of creative impotence--but always worth the effort!!!

As for ideas, I may as well share the freshest one. This one is very raw / totally unworked. It came to me--very rudely--just as I was finally falling asleep, but I grumbled to myself and went and wrote it down. Then I forgot all about it until just now when I opened my notepad. It goes like:

All the world is an art gallery--or a subterranean or extra/inter-dimensional gallery is discovered (Piranesi style?). Like it goes on forever, or is too much in some way that challenges our notions...

Now that I think of it, this seems like it was obviously influenced by the outpouring of creative content from nebulous or inhuman sources that is possible with LLMs and image generators. And then maybe grappling with that concept. Maybe there's something to it, and maybe there's not. I'm not sure yet, since it is still so raw I have no idea how I would express it.

[–] ellie@slrpnk.net 2 points 6 months ago

Please try not to become possessed 😱 think of the children, we should keep demon possessions away from the mod team haha.