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[-] TastyWheat@lemmy.world 19 points 1 year ago

It'd read better if the last line had 'giving', it's missing a syllable

[-] Naja_kaouthia@sh.itjust.works 7 points 1 year ago

Definitely scans better.

this post was submitted on 14 Oct 2023
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