One of my favourites — The Murderer by Luke Kennard (sh.itjust.works)

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[-] funkless_eck@sh.itjust.works 1 points 1 year ago

No, I don't think so. "Would you like a sandwich? ... The murderer eats his sandwich" implies the narrator gives him a sandwich. Cheese and ham is a common sandwich.

[-] amzd@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

Nah ham is the flesh of someone else

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