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I have trouble translating my thoughts and ideas. I realized my problem is I starting points or foundations. Does anyone else have this issue? (hexbear.net)

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So, I noticed a problem I have. I have ideas that always, in my head, appear as a vague shape or idea, but I can never get a concrete idea of how something would go. or look I can only detail pivotal moments, but I can never picture the hours in between each event.

I have Autism. Over the past year, I had been trying to write, but I could never effectively translate my ideas. Every time I get to the keyboard, it seems my flowing mind grinds to a halt. I have been working alone, so that doesn't help much. I am good at designing character designs in Heroforge, but not so good at putting them to writing, because I will need a constant concrete foundation for how something would look. And I have trouble coming up with how something would be without any kind of foundation or starting point

It was watching two episodes of The 2005 'The Snow Queen' anime today, that I realized that my creative forte was not in writing a book without a helping visual aid. However, I cannot make visual art either.

I had the idea of somehow making a visual novel format, where there is an emphasis on character dialogue and interactions. Is there some program or software where I can show a story in a visual novel format? That is, showing lots of still backgrounds and characters with lots of text?

Edit: External Aid! That's the concept I was looking for. I can't formulate something solely off the top of my head. Whether it's bouncing ideas by sharing with others, collaborating with others, or just having a picture of something, any kind of external stimuli or aid is something I always need to be able to have ideas at all.

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[–] worlds_okayest_mech_pilot@hexbear.net 1 points 1 year ago

Regarding visual novels, there are two standard types: ADV (Adventure) and NVL (novel). There are plenty of NVL type visual novels that contain tons and tons of text, while still having characters and backgrounds.

Also, what helps me write is pretending to switch "narrators" in my head. Like if I'm being descriptive about my world, I think of what a history documentary narrator would say about a subject. Or if a character is telling a casual flashback, I think of my friends telling stories of things that happened to them. It doesn't have to be the specific text that you write, of course. It's just a general tone and style guide that I found useful. You can get creative with it, like being a fashion contest judge assigning "points" for an outfit that you're describing.

Finally, if you have the means, you might want to invest in a second or even third monitor if you do your creative work online. Having multiple screens open for quick reference helps. It's not super critical or anything, especially with budget considerations.