I'm gonna give this and the original another closer read soon.
I think some of the criticisms fall a bit flat. Mainly about the "utopianism" of the original essay. As far as I can tell, it was intended to primarily be a speculative account of how something might be proposed/produced within a non-capitalist framework. I also saw it as a response to Morozov, whose essay in NLR is likely the best criticism of the various "digital socialisms" and poses questions I dont think a single author has been able to answer. But, I also likely ignored more of the left com stuff in the end notes essay tbh.
(I honestly think we still need more of this "utopian projection". There is a reason What is To Be Done? Is named after a novel.)
However, I broadly agree with the parts about accounting. We will be keeping books until the sun explodes, and maybe after that if we get our shit together. I'm a bit surprised in all the Lenin- and marxology the author didn't mention that Marx himself was not actually a big promoter of labor vouchers. Outside of the critique I don't think it ever appears as a serious suggestion again.
I don't think that simple "labor accounting" via vouchers is enough though. We have an external budget, and it's counted in carbon. Any form of accounting in a socialist future, if we don't want to destroy the planet, would need to take this into regard. It has to be done in cold hard numbers too, a hand wave, "We will not destroy the world" is just not enough. I don't think this potential system can be perfectly described right now, and it will likely many problems as it is developed. But we do have the tools to do it tomorrow if somehow capital gave in and handed over the keys. But therein lies the larger problem.
The best, but imperfect, exploration of this is Cockshott and Co latest book, or even Dapprichs dissertation on it. From ecological to labor accounting, to market clearing prices for good distribution, etc. But their short coming is its lack of imagination (stem brain), which the end notes article has. (Though the latest book reads a bit like a policy proposal for liberals. But the libs don't give a shit about our fancy accounting machines.)
Idk, some random thoughts Ig. I don't fully grasp what the authors politics are, or who this collective is. They cite a trot favorably but cite left coms unfavourably. Hate Stalin, so likely a trot I guess. I do think it's a bit sad that these authors kinda refuse to engage with Actually Existing Economic Planning though. Unless it's Walmart and you are a verso author.