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submitted 1 year ago by DmMacniel@feddit.de to c/scifi@kbin.social

Hello Sci-fi fans and writers, I hope that this here is the correct spot to ask this question regarding a conundrum I have come about during my work on a sci-fi short Story.

Outline

In said Short Story, I have some people (Agents) chasing after some other people (Heroes). The heroes stumbled upon some critical information that could damage the faction (Bad Guy) that employs the chasing party. The information got intercepted in time, but to make sure that the information wouldn't be leaked again, they would need to silence the heroes.

Technology

In space there are two modes of flight: conventional reaction based propulsion and a higher speed propulsion which uses a so-called jump drive which flings the spaceship along a predetermined trajectory at high sub-light speeds (max speeds would be 0.5c). There is near instantaneous communications, but you would need to be in coverage of the network itself, which is flaky at best.

Conundrum

So how would agents be able to intercept / interdict the heroes in a plausible fashion? Would it be reasonable to have a micro wormhole generator or some other way to deploy gravimetric wells, which would destabilize the entire star system? Would it be anticlimactic to just have the agents wait for the heroes to finish their jump, as they would know where they would drop out?

I would love to hear opinions and suggestions from you.

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[-] swope@kbin.social 6 points 1 year ago

This is the sort of thing I would ask @nyrath about. I don't know if a mention like that can summon him.

I love to think of fanciful physics for astronautics, and I think audiences like it best when the system is self-consistent. It's very hard to design systems that don't lead to contradictions or paradoxes. In a way I think it's like designing a playable game.

[-] nyrath@spacey.space 5 points 1 year ago

@swope @DmMacniel
Alas, I am not on Lemmy, so I never saw the original post.

In this case, I again note that the important thing is to focus on Effects, not Causes.

http://www.projectrho.com/public_html/rocket/fasterlight.php#id--Establishing_Limits

The desired Effect is "intercept / interdict the heroes".
The proposed Cause of "deploy gravimetric wells" seems to have too many unintended consequences. For starters it can destroy planets.

Perhaps some technobabble that slows down the protagonist's ship engine?

[-] DmMacniel@feddit.de 2 points 1 year ago

I am honored! I'll take a look on your document.

And yeah gravimetric wells are a bit overkill.

Another user suggested, as the travel sequence is on rails, that sending projectiles or other kind of weaponry toward them from the other side would be a suitable idea.

[-] swope@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

I started following @nyrath on Google+, and followed him as a refugee to Twitter. I lost track of him when I abandoned Twitter (mostly) after the Muskageddon. I escaped Reddit recently and happened to find him again.

Now I have this idea for space settlers jumping from one corporate colony to another as their once-visionary founders turn to squeezing profit from their tenants.

[-] simonbp@social.linux.pizza 1 points 1 year ago

@swope @nyrath @DmMacniel Collapsing corporate space colonies seems really underexplored, but very cyberpunk, theme

[-] nyrath@spacey.space 1 points 1 year ago
[-] swope@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

What was the purpose of parking near each other? It doesn't seem like the crews could cross over to the other ships.

[-] darrelplant@mstdn.social 1 points 1 year ago

@simonbp @swope @nyrath @DmMacniel

Story concepts:

Giganaire buys space colony and cuts costs, killing himself and everyone on the colony because he used air filters made from toilet paper.

Giganaire buys space colony and fires 3/4 of the maintenance staff, claiming they weren't doing a good enough job, but does not replace them.

Hey, this is fun!

[-] nyrath@spacey.space 1 points 1 year ago

@darrelplant @simonbp @swope @DmMacniel

The stories almost write themselves, don't they?

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[-] gonesnake@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

I like the idea of the Agents knowing to some degree when and where the Heroes are going to arrive. Played right it could add a lot of tension. If jump-drive has a predetermined destination I imagine that once it kicks in your ship is locked into its path--only being able to be knocked from it or, as you suggest , something is done to slow the Heroe's ship.

How it could work dramatically: the Heroes slip away from the Agents using the jump-drive. The Agents quickly activate some device (a pulsing buoy, technobabble) in the last place the ship was seen. It lets off three thumps in every direction. The Agent's ships rock back with each pulse after which they retrieve the buoy. A little dialogue about waiting for the pulses to dissipate before engaging their own jump-drive ("we don't want to get caught in the pulse's wake") and they're off.

Cut to the Heroes ship in the jump-space: They think they've made a quick escape but the ship stumbles and an alarm goes off. A quick look at their instruments tells them the ship is dropping speed. This happens twice more-the three pulses catching up to them-each time slowing them not quite out of jump-space but enough to know they're heading into the trouble they thought they's just outrun.

This could be used in universe as a something that is rarely deployed because it does affect every ship that engaged jump-drive in that area within a certain timeframe (pick your area of effect and time factors for best storytelling) so it's quite a statement as to how badly the Agents want to thwart the heroes. When the 'pulse buoy' is used, yes, you may slow them down but you may have also affected local commerce, local military and even other Agents in the area by using it. It's effective but costly. You've just broadcast your location and the desperation of your goals to everyone in that area.

[-] eldadoinquieto@mastorol.es 1 points 1 year ago

@gonesnake

Reading this it's easy to think about the #StarWars Interdictor-class Star Destroyer :

https://starwars.fandom.com/wiki/Interdictor-class_Star_Destroyer

In #Traveller #RPG the referee should think about if the buoy can be carried inside a ship or it can be used only by space stations and other technical issues (energy costs, how many times can be used, etc.)

@nyrath @DmMacniel @swope

[-] gonesnake@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

Now that's a great idea, if the buoy can't be transported on a chase ship, space stations only. Making it not always available adds to the drama and keeps it from just being deployed over and over again regardless of its local impact. Even better if only one faction has access to it.

[-] eldadoinquieto@mastorol.es 1 points 1 year ago

@gonesnake

For example, and this can be a secret weapon coveted by many.

@nyrath @DmMacniel @swope

[-] DmMacniel@feddit.de 1 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

That's some great idea and tech you got there! Also great storytelling.

[-] gonesnake@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

I like science fiction that has limitations even if it's not based on 'realistic' science. Internal consistency and accepting the obvious extrapolations of any invented technology has to be in place for it to not just feel like magic or deus ex machina. I've found that it usually has the bonus of adding to the dramatic possibilities of the story.

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[-] nyrath@spacey.space 1 points 1 year ago

@swope

I agree with you, that if a science fiction author cannot keep things strictly scientific, the next best thing is to make it internally self-consistent. Yes, this is a challenge. Larry Niven found that out.

[-] swope@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

I suppose that inventing a new self-consistent model of physics that is consistent with real-world data is not really that different from what professional theoretical physicists are doing.

[-] nyrath@spacey.space 1 points 1 year ago

@swope @DmMacniel

I seem to recall Larry Niven grumbling about his invention, the stasis field. Originally made to solve a minor scientific problem in one story. Turned out to be far too useful. Subsequent stories had to have their problems vetted to ensure they were not trivially solved by the stasis field

[-] Aesthesiaphilia@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

Why my biggest gripe with the new star wars was that now relativistic missiles are a thing. Breaks the whole universe. Who needs a death star when you can just point a ship at a planet and blast into it at 0.99c

[-] eltimablo@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

My mind immediately went to an as-yet unexplained "inertia sink." My idea is that it somehow (space magic) robs the target of all of its momentum to stop it dead, perhaps channeling it back to the aggressor or into an explosion to knock out the target's engines. Dunno how or if it would work in your universe, though.

[-] kestrel7@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

IDK if anticlimactic is the right word. If the antagonists know where the protagonists are going, why would they go out of their way to interdict? Just go where they're going to be and kill them on arrival.

Alternatively, what if the antagonists just have a spy/traitor onboard the heroes' ship?

[-] skulblaka@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

Just hit 'em with an EMP. Your ship isn't going anywhere while unpowered, even the jump drive will have a "spooling up" period that can be interrupted, and even the most basic, disposable form of thrust - being a solid fuel rocket - can't be fired without a spark. You either have an electronic starter, disabled by the EMP, or else someone crawls up the exhaust tube with a Bic lighter and sacrifices every component atom of their existence to the gods of fiery speed.

The game Starsector has a neat play on this, where certain ships can fire off an "interdiction pulse" which is a short range directed EMP that shuts down the engines of whoever it is pointed at. You can outrun it with a good heading and good tactics, you can juke it with careful positioning, or you can go dark and camp in an asteroid belt and hope the space cops miss you on their search. But if you get got by the interdiction pulse you've got a good 60 seconds or more of being a sitting duck in space. No engines, no comms, you're lucky if the life support even keeps pumping oxygen while the corvettes close in.

If you don't want to deal with the plot holes that massive EMP bursts bring (how do you shield your ship against it's own EMPs? How do you pierce a shielded ship with one?) you could make an "interdiction module" be a legally mandated piece of equipment in every ship, which when activated, cuts power to all major systems. Sort of like how ID transponders are usually handled in space operas - hell, combine the two together. Any ship running dark without a transponder active can be considered a threat to be removed on sight, not only because they aren't broadcasting an identity but also because they may not have an interdiction module installed. Skip the pulling over part of the traffic stop and step right to torpedoes, because they are probably pirates.

Naturally, real pirates won't have an interdiction module and will be attacked on sight by most security forces. A hypothetical protagonist would be able to sabotage their own module to escape capture, at the cost of being assumed to be a pirate until getting it fixed or replaced at, more than likely, a less-than-reputable shipyard.

[-] Aesthesiaphilia@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

or else someone crawls up the exhaust tube with a Bic lighter and sacrifices every component atom of their existence to the gods of fiery speed.

Now that sounds like an excellent passage to write

[-] DmMacniel@feddit.de 1 points 1 year ago

Nice explaination on why the heroes wouldn't be trackable by the agents. They are flying in a pirate ship.

EMPs would be perfect for ruthless agents, they just want to make their boss happy. Cleaning up afterwards could net some valuable resources as well.

[-] inkican@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago* (last edited 1 year ago)

Ooh - workshopping a scifi story? My time to shine!

  1. Check out how the Star Wars EU handled this in the Thrawn series (Hint: Interdictor cruisers)
  2. Tractor beams - your friend and mine
  3. Think of every way other people have done this and ask yourself - "how could it be different?"
  4. Plausible is fun but pleasure is better - people need a story they can engage with and will forgive all kinds of logical fallacies if you've engaged with their emotions sufficiently.

Hope that helps

Source: I do this for a living

[-] DmMacniel@feddit.de 1 points 1 year ago

Oh, that's some good advice, and I'll take a closer look on your website as well.

Yeah I know about those Interdictor cruisers from the EU, that was my second idea I also mentioned: e.g. generating gravity wells so that you can't jump to hyperspace. But I believe that only ships of the size of an ISD could have such components. And as such only the militaristic empire in my setting would be able to get a hold on that.

Tractor Beams are interesting. I could certainly make them work in that scenario as it could disorientate an opposing ship and or be used in a defensive manner.

Your fourth point is really good advice. And thanks again for your input!

[-] inkican@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

Yeah I know about those Interdictor cruisers from the EU, that was my second idea I also mentioned: e.g. generating gravity wells so that you can't jump to hyperspace. But I believe that only ships of the size of an ISD could have such components. And as such only the militaristic empire in my setting would be able to get a hold on that.

This is an intrinsic functionality of an implausible science-like device that A) hyperspace is a 'speed' you can achieve and B) gravity wells affect their behavior.

I'm saying all that to say this: when it comes to scifi, your technology doesn't have to be 100% factual, logical, plausible. Engage w/ their emotions - make them feel something.

[-] chgowiz@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

As someone who has to write RPG settings and scenarios, if I can't be consistent with the tech or magic, then I think of what would be the easiest way to do something.

In this case? If I had to do this and didn't want to throw in crazy tech? Easiest way to stop the Heroes? The Villains bribe/blackmail someone to interrupt the jump, or they've planted a device to sabotage the engines at a certain time. They're waiting at that point.

Nothing like a good ambush AND some intrigue ("how did they do that?")

My players hate when I interrupt their journey. We're on month 3 of adventures due to an interrupted journey... and now they trust NOBODY!

[-] HelixDab@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

Take a page from the way the Putin and the FSB dealt with the Wagner group; hold families hostage. They don't have to interdict the protagonists, they just have to be willing to murder every single person that the protagonist cares about if the protagonist doesn't turn themselves in. The protagonist might be willing to sacrifice their own life to achieve a goal, but are they willing to sacrifice their entire extended family and all of their college friends?

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[-] gillrmn@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

You can take an idea from real life(very sad news though when I heard).

The MagLev trains run very fast through a predetermined route. Technically they can go really really fast. But they have to run through a pre-determined route. However, it is through a series of magnets. Earlier iirc, there was a train when some evil people removed just a single magnet and caused the train to crash.

In your novel, the heroes are taking the predetermined route. The main challenge for agents should be to figure out the route. Then pay some mercenaries along a route which cannot be well monitored (due to being remote or conflict zone) to sabotage the route. As the route is predetermined, exact position of the vessel at exact time is known in an unmonitored area. This can be used to create a simpler electromagnetic trap which would reduce the speed over a long distance, or divert the route. EMP can be used to disable the ship, making the ship just a container being transported. The trap later being destroyed, but still leading a trail behind for someone to find what happened. This should work as long as speed is less than light, should work for <0.5c. But the area of influence where control is not possible should be a large geograhic area due to speed.

You can also have that at that particular spot the speed is slow due to a curve etc. And villians are just removing what is causing the route to bend for just an exact moment when heroes are travelling there.

[-] FaceDeer@kbin.social 2 points 1 year ago

You said there is near-instantaneous communication. How about having the agents "phone ahead" to another group of agents that are nearer to the place the heroes are going and have them jump there first, so that the heroes arrive into an ambush? Police do that sort of thing in high-speed chases in the real world.

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[-] wjrii@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

Maybe something where the well generator pulls your Heroes off course from the pre-defined trajectory and they "drop out" to an unexpected situation, like (and also unlike) when the Millenium Falcon arrives at "Alderaan"?

I guess the method you choose depends on your universe's departures from "real" physics, but also your story's narrative aims. Are you looking to build a tense chase sequence or have a gotcha surprise?

[-] DmMacniel@feddit.de 1 points 1 year ago

I am looking for a "gotcha surprise". The reader would know that the agents are on their toes to find and neutralize the heroes, which will then end in the interdiction and if still alive a space battle.

I wouldn't want to meddle with gravimetrics as it would have unwanted consequences e.g. pulling planets, moons and asteroids out of established orbits and the like :)

0.5c? Is this all taking place in one solar system?

[-] HelixDab@kbin.social 1 points 1 year ago

Not directly related, but .5c is going to be slooooooooooow for interstellar travel. Proxima Centauri is roughly 268,770 AU away, and 1 AU is about 8.3 light-minutes. That works out to be 2.23M light minutes, or 4.2 light years. If someone is traveling at .5c, that's 8.4 years to get from our solar system to the very closest star system. And of course it's all at relativistic speeds, so while it may not feel long to the people on the ship, it's still the better part of a decade.

Right now, the closest earth-like planet we know of (similar size, similar star, similar orbital period) is Kepler-452b. Kepler-452b is 1800 light years away, or 3200 years for the people observing the craft that was traveling there. This is getting solidly into Joel Haldeman's "The Forever War" territory.

IMO, unless you want to do a lot of math to figure out the effects of time dilation, you might want to have some kind of science-magic that allows your characters to sidestep relativity.

(I believe it was Charles Stross that worked relativity into a galactic cryptocurrency economic system. He got around relativity by assuming that almost all people were inorganic, and able to copy and back up their consciousness, or sleep through the decades that interstellar travel required.)

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